luf100
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Post by luf100 on Dec 22, 2008 22:14:31 GMT -5
I think this was one of the first fics I read by you Sarry. And I had to read it at night in the quietness so I could take it all in! There was a lot to understand but you did it great! Definitely one of your best fics.
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Post by sarryb on Dec 23, 2008 8:01:03 GMT -5
Aww thanks. When I was editing I was kinda, hmm this is a cool story, but I didn't write it so well.... but hey if the story makes sense... lol Sarry xx
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ladytaz29
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Post by ladytaz29 on Dec 24, 2008 13:27:09 GMT -5
Wanted to finish reading before I commented...absolutely loved it. Good plot, really great the way you integrated the teams.
Wonderful to see them all working together and developing the bond between them.
Surprising finish, but really really good...
Looking forward to reading more of your stuff...
Taz
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Post by sarryb on Dec 24, 2008 13:52:10 GMT -5
Awww thanks very much. I'm so pleased you read it. It is really long!! Sarry xx
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ladytaz29
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Post by ladytaz29 on Dec 24, 2008 15:37:48 GMT -5
Could have read more....that tells you it was well worth the read.. Maybe a sequal...... ;D
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Post by sarryb on Dec 24, 2008 15:53:03 GMT -5
Awww thanks. That is highly doubyful. I kinda ended up hating it. Though I much prefered the end to all the rest. Lots of drama! I have loads more stuff, mainly on fanfiction.net. I have to check the content of some before I post here. Sarry xx
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Post by CarusoLover on Dec 30, 2008 19:01:48 GMT -5
This is one of my FAVE stories by Sarry! I'm always tellin people to check it out. I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT. I could read quite a bit more of it. The only complaint I ever had was that it's NOT LONG ENOUGH!
Sarry ROCKS!
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Post by ladytaz29 on Dec 30, 2008 19:04:48 GMT -5
I totally agree Kat...Like I said, I could have read more. ;D
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Post by earthylady on Jan 1, 2009 14:29:02 GMT -5
Great story sarryb.Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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Post by suzmicsoc on Jan 1, 2009 19:17:24 GMT -5
I just read this whole story today It was great how you incorporated all three teams and how they worked together wonderfully...didn't expect Jonathan to be the killer...great story Sarry Suzy
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